Jenna is a 13 year old girl who is loves horses. She has been riding for almost 3 years now. She has placed in every show she has entered. All she needs is her own horse. When her parents finally agree to buy her one, she freaks out in happiness. It takes a while but they finally find the right match:Shadow. Shadow’s previous owner was a little shady and didn’t give much information about Shadow’s past. After a little training and getting to know Shadow a little Jenna (without thinking very much) decides to enter a show.
Getting ready for the last jump on the cross country course. It was pretty big Jenna thought.”One,two,…” She never got to three.
The crowd showed mixed emotions as Jenna hit hard solid ground.
Jenna had no clue what was happening. “Get her on the stretcher!” someone had screamed.”Take her to the ER!” shouted another.
Her parents were burying their face into their hands. Sobbing as loud as they could. Crying their hearts out. Screaming”Why? Why?”But finally her Dad went to check on her. She didn’t look so good.
Everyone was afraid she was dead. That people hadn’t reacted as quick as they should have.
Comment on what you think. Should I write the whole book?
~Lauren
Getting ready for the last jump on the cross country course. It was pretty big Jenna thought.”One,two,…” She never got to three.
The crowd showed mixed emotions as Jenna hit hard solid ground.
Jenna had no clue what was happening. “Get her on the stretcher!” someone had screamed.”Take her to the ER!” shouted another.
Her parents were burying their face into their hands. Sobbing as loud as they could. Crying their hearts out. Screaming”Why? Why?”But finally her Dad went to check on her. She didn’t look so good.
Everyone was afraid she was dead. That people hadn’t reacted as quick as they should have.
Comment on what you think. Should I write the whole book?
~Lauren
Wait you wrote that? If you did then I want to hear more! You should write more that was so so so good!
ReplyDeleteCan you please write more, please?
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